Lost Space !?
Posted on July 1st, 2008 by Kid
Oblivious to the world around me
I roam in the labyrinth unaware
trying to break free from this confined space
I think I am moving
but am going nowhere
wondering what is holding me
I realize the very step I am taking
is holding me back
and again I muse
Frown at my ownself
for the reason still a mystery to me
wondering why I am doing so
I do it still unwantingly
Never knew that deep down that hardcore techie lies this poet.
Don’t know about u, but the way I see it you are nieither confined within nor stagnant you are moving like a bullet towards your target. Way to go buddy.
During my time of various studies, I was introduced to this concept of LBDN
LOOK BUSY DO NOTHING.
I believe I have achieved perfection in this concept. And that I guess is not something to be very proud of.
And maybe that is the same thing, which deceived you into believing that I have target.
With or without target, your poetry is worth reading and makes sense. Mine doesn’t to most of the people; so, I appreciate it when words can convey not just to your own heart but to others as well.
Well.. its just a play on words. Good to know that it made sense to you. All along I thought in the exactly same way, that they don’t convey they meaning I meant.
“I appreciate it when words can convey not just to your own heart but to others as well”